Promise

A love and a promise that will last forever.

On that day we looked up at the stars and the skies

a promise was born saying no more lies

 

even when i'm gone that promise will stand true

even when i'm gone that promise will stand for you

 

and even when time disappears

we will hold that promise for years

we will bare each others fears

and tell stories of our nightmares

 

and when the sun sets for me

it will rise for you and set you free

 

dont cry for me to stay

ill take the hit to open your path way

 

maybe in the afterlife if this love is real

i will make you my wife and finally we will feel

 

but not now maybe a different time

a different body a different mind

 

 and in the end we will see those same stars

at that time we will see who we are

see what we have done to get this far

 

but when it's over another promise will be born

that not even by time we will be torn

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[..R.I.P..]

I adored this piece. I can feel the love that flows with every word in this poem. I loved it. Keep up the good work.

[Greg Skura]

Love is eternal ! Thank You for sharing!

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Wow...i really like this poem...you did a very good job
Great Work :)

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is really nice.. sweet and sad too.. but as they say better to have lost a love than never have loved at all.. in this case here we have a love and promise made to keep for all eternity!! Great writing, feeling and flow here.. keep it up! =)