Whispers to the perfect day

You said i will gain more pain then i could comprehend

I told you i just want to find the end

I just want a place i can defend

 

but theres no perfect way

to bring the perfect day

 

I will just get killed by the dark

telling me i was doomed from the start

my mind will control my heart

 

but it was this i refused

no matter how much i get confused

this is the path i will choose

 

the past does'nt matter

i'll search til time shatters

 

i will find the perfect way

and send whipers to the perfect day

 

Reviews

[Mariah]

I love the title of this poem. It really grabs your attention.

'i'll search til time shatters'

Wow. Some very brilliant lines in this. :)