Last chance to change the world

Now I know there's no other way

to bring the next day

 

A tomorrow

A day with no sorrow

 

There's only one way to break sin

that's to give up truth in the end

 

let the lies flow

I have to let you go

 

So i can't have a change of heart

if i want to be the one to rewite this part

the one to bring the world out of dark

 

make the world crumble and fall

just so i can rewrite us all

 

I don't want to be forgiven

i just want you amoung the living

 

Time turned to sand

confused by greed of man

maybe when it's over you will understand

 

for a life with no beginning

has such a sad ending

 

no light to console me

just deadly memories

visions on how the end should be

 

Now wipe away your tears

while i wipe away your fears

Reviews

[Bloody_Stars]

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[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

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Great Job :)

[DarkkxVoid]

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[Jenna]

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[Mariah]

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[brittneymarie]

This poem was great :] I enjoyed reading it

[Elizabeth Thief]

Wow, this poem s awesome. It's wonderfully write and full of emotion.
I love the line: I don't want to be forgiven I just want you to be among the living

[Wildecat]

This is a well written poem, a pleasure to read your poetry.