life Runner

life Runner

A Poem by karmic

I touch what you want me to feel

I see what you made me think was real

never given me a chance to heal

 

im everything you wanted me to be

im everything you want people to see

the only thing im not is free

 

maybe one day i will see whats true

but that day i will turn into you

and run people lives like you do

 

© 2008 karmic


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Seems like you've dealt with a controlling individual, here. I thought you did great with this! It has great rhythm, and I could almost hear it being sung.

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