what you give

my head is filled with stress

my heart can't take the pain in my chest

i'm not dead but you want to put my soul to rest

i give more while you give less

 

you want to stop living

you want to be forgotten

as i want to be forgiven

 

you hate that your dead to the core

but why do you hate me more

 

trying keep to gather trying to see what's true

but my path is blocked by people like you

 

with you i have nothing to gain

but your heartless pain

 

now your mind is out of control

what you need to give back is my soul 

Reviews

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wonderful empowerment poem. That is right. You don't have to take any more sh%#. I applaud your stance and willingness to proclaim your strength. This was a very nice piece. A chant or a theme is what life this can take on. Everlasting.

[scorpion-red]

wow this was deep i think its awesome and you really make a statement

this poems beast and i agree with wildcat lol

[Wildecat]

Tell him if he doesn't I'll come down there and kick his butt. Nice write hope things get better for you.