It's over

It's over

A Poem by karmic

I left a letter under your door

but your already crying on the floor

 

you and your tears of sin

yea i know where you been

but the thing is you should have been crying then

 

your wonding why i did'nt open the door

cause i did'nt want to be there anymore

now your dead to the core

showing your blood and gore

 

unhook my phone

now your heart shows a different tone

 

i can't live with your lies

cuts surrounding your eyes

 

you say everything is fine

but it's over and your not mine

© 2008 karmic


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Sometimes you have to cut your losses and move on. Nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:( Loved ur poem. Beautifully written and i love hw you make each line connect the relevant message!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That sounds pretty final to me. Good rhyming. You sure cut him loose, sherneise.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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