Room for one more

The choas of family arrival....

Swept in by arrival

Taken by commotion

Never saying hello

Only a moments devotion

 

Time fly's rapid

Company so vapid

Nightfall sets in

Visit spread thin

 

Tomorrow try again

Voice battles kin

Survival of chaos

The street I walk

Across

Reviews

[karmax]

And this a family crowd John...lol...always enjoyable , but yet hectic at times!! Thanks for reading :)

[John Faulkner]

Such a hectic crowd..I would want to get away as well

Nice poem..I can really feel your inner emotions in this

SPLENDID


JOHN

[Daytonight]

No wonder you walk the streets alone, you want to get away from that company! Lol! Well done!

[EZ Writer]

Lol/ I don't think you can handle this company
to much longer I'd say!
Hope you survive, that they
don't overstay!! grin'
hugs Easy