forever eternity

forever eternity

A Poem by karmax
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acrostic

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Home to you from work I rush

Undoing a stressful day, into your arms I bust

Slowly exhaling onto you, the day I've been through

Beautiful is the moment, standing there with you

Appreciating the simple things for me you do

No ending to our life of journeys together

Destined for eternity forever

© 2011 karmax


Author's Note

karmax
For my hub-cap, who roll's along with me, no matter what ! <3

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I love acrostic poetry and I love this, it is so nice to see happiness in the lives of others and there is nothing so peaceful as to have one to turn to when the days are long and overwhelming who will listen or not or just do what it is you need kudos to you and your hub-cap as you so fondly say, thanks for sharing this little write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love this and your A/N. The road of life and love's indeed a long one and you do appreciate the simple things in life, which most have been taken for granted.
Karrie, thank you for leading me here. OMG if I don't write enough as it is right now

Posted 13 Years Ago


A beautiful and positive poem. We need those strong and good people to give us energy and strength. I enjoyed the complete poem. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Mystic...trying to pen to stay in the tune of things, all the while figuring out transition from Ap to here!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awe! This is so sweet and a lovely tribute to a loved one.
A beautiful Acrostic indeed. Well done!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Thanks Day! It's like basking in the sun, when he see's I have penned about him! He really is a one of a kind keeper :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh this is so very beautiful! I am sure your "hub-cap" really enjoyed this one! Makes me long for my guy! Well written. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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karmax
karmax

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Hello :) I am a 32 yr old from NY. I am married and have a daughter the age of Seven. I love to write poetry and play around with words, thus has brought me here. I have a sense of humor and hope my w.. more..

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