Nice flow of words and thoughts in the poem. I like the statements.
"I am light.
A particle waking and
A wave dreaming."
Thank you for the nice journey in the outstanding poem.
Coyote
very nicely written, i liked the way you expressed your feelings here..just the font was not clear for me, maybe its my own problem, but in general, it is really wonderful
i particularly like the repeated lines "i am light. A particle waking and a wave dreaming".
the poem is a rare combination of science and mysticism. the substantial and the insubstantial. beautifully written. so simple yet so complex. loved it.
I love this. The particles and waves are all we truly are, and what we will always remain to be, whose energy never diminishes, no matter how it touches others. Wonderful, wonderful write.
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