Up To You

I could listen 

To the saddest songs,

But none could tell you how lonely I am.

Stories of loves lost

With rhyming words and a melody,

And those choruses mean nothing

When you're actually living them.

And the ending lines

Doesn't mean the song is done.

It means that the rest of it

Is up to you.

Reviews

[ColorblindMartian.]

ah, the pain of being lonely, its well written, with a great deal of emotion. Great job, keep writing.

[GamingGal]

Pros: Ah, such sorrow and pain here. I tend to listen to music when I'm sad or something, and I've been listening to it a LOT what with heartache and stuff. This little poem flows on it's own without having to depend on rhyme scheme or anything. My favorite lines would have to be the sixth and seventh. They just sort of hit home, you know?

Cons: Nothing, really.

Overall: I like this poem. And the ending is nice. Well written and good job :)