Family

Family

A by Karlie
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family=best friends

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Family is a major part of life.People think that family is just there to comfort you,make you feel good when your down but they are your best friends.If you really stop and think about it someone in your family is your best friend.If you think that someone that is not in your family is a best friend think twice.A family member will never leave you,where a friend can.So think about it,does it make sense now?

My Grandma is my best friend.I would always go to her for any problem and she always had the anwser.At first I might have not felt like it would help but in the end it did.She is there to help me,comfort me,give me advice,and most of all I knew she would be there for me no matter what.I have learned from her mistakes and it has made me a better person.Her advice helped me through tough times and I will never forget that.

Someone older is also a better friend than anyone you can ever be friends with.They can give you the right advice no matter what.You can also learn from their mistakes which will make your life better.You can also listen to their stories,listen good because they have thoes stories to tell you something about life.All in all family is a better friend then you will ever have.

© 2008 Karlie


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Good work. Much better than I was doing at 14. Keep practicing. My story "Grandpa's Dragon" is one of those stories you talk about. You might write out some of the stories your Grandmother tells you. Keep up your good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Family is as you said very important. They are the glue that holds everything together. Loved this peom. Noticed on the third line from the bottom you have the word thoes. I think you meant those. Anyway a good write.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on November 14, 2008

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Karlie
Karlie

Bradford, PA



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Hi I'm Karlie Ryan.I live in Bradford,PA.Im 14 years young.I was brought into this world May 16,1994.I am currently taken and loving every minute of it.I have brown hair.I am caucasian but have a .. more..

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