Fear and Defiance

Fear and Defiance

A Poem by karl16
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A poem about the worlds reality that we're living in world and fear and dread.

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Fear and Defiance


Dreams were shattered, tears were shed,
In a world of anxiety, fear, and dread.
Look around you, feel and see,
Don't surrender, just fight defiantly.

Evil's lurking in all man's actions,
Clinging immorality and atrocious temptations.
Innumerable lives were tormented and suffered,
Even dignities and faiths were slowly slaughtered.

Poverty, greed, and fame pushes men to transgress law,
Doing heinous crimes and using other's fatal flaw.
Worries and discomforts served as man's shadow,
Confusions and troubles peering at our own window.

Countless calamities and cataclysms caused terror distress,
Followed by grief, sorrow, agony, misery, and sadness.
If you're bombarded with downfalls and fears,
Will you keep the pace? Or cede and shed tears.

© 2013 karl16


Author's Note

karl16
pls read and review! Thanks

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Nice one, Karl. This one is inspiring. Like the rhyming, too. Keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

karl16

11 Years Ago

Thanks Dhaye! I'll definitely keep writing!
A profound poem and well presented.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like reading work from young poets, this a good poem ( but please, please not pls !)....

Posted 11 Years Ago


karl16

11 Years Ago

Haha! Thank you very much sir! I appreciated your comment and the PLEASE thing.
Deep subject. Keep writing my friend

Posted 11 Years Ago


Deeply appreciate the spirit of not giving in behind this piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really liked this. I liked the darkness and descriptive details to it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A splendid read and write...:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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karl16
karl16

Malaybalay, Bukidnon, Philippines



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I'm not erudite, not factionless, not abnegation, Not divergent,...I'm a dauntless. Kidding! Hi, wassup. I'm Karl, i'm 15 and turning sixteen this July. Young for a writer isn't it? Although I bel.. more..

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