Emotion Struck.

A poem on emotions..

Its tough to decide whether emotion is an asset or a liability,

Cus it has to its name love as well as jealousy,

The emotion expressed in the chuckle of a child depicts childish innocence,

The unnecessary enemity when man loses his sense,

The disturbed feeling when the mind is restless,

The relationships which can be a boon or a mess,

The rivalry that arises in those in look our for social recognition,

The emotional bonding that sets the universe in fusion,

The desire to seek solitude,

To get away from all the feud,

Without these a man is emotionless,

With these a man is senseless,

It could be a harmful trap,

As well as a very powerful cap,

Until he discovers how to use these as a tool,

And stop exploiting it like a fool..

Author's Note

Thanks for reading and reviewing the poem. Will keep in mind all your suggestions.


Note: Pls. do not use any abusive words.

Reviews

[Imagination-mage]

this is a very good poem, really screams out the emotions of the universe!

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This is really deep and so powerful, I really enjoyed this write and it's wonderful flow and rhyme scheme....xo