The Waterfall..

A poem describing the feeling of sitting beside the waterfall..

As the water drops,
The sprinkling sound is what i hear,
It soothes me,
makes me calm,
And makes me wink eyes with tranquility,
Oh it feels beautiful,
to sit by the fall,
and feel the sparks on the face,
Tip tip tip the water sings,
It instills wonder,
for nature,
Making peace and harmony..
~peace.creations

Author's Note

Thanks for reading and reviewing the poem. Will keep in mind all your suggestions.


Note: Pls. do not use any abusive words.

Reviews

[TonyJay]

I feel what youre getting at, but i feel yo jump back and forth. Instead of going in a logical order. Lovely poem though.