Broken Lovestruck

A broken heart really give you a broken lovestruck,sometime its not easy to get over you love ones, the pain is unbearable and unforgettable but in due time the scars will heal and be untainted.

Love is really dying
Temperature is rising
Lovers keep lying
Tears are slowly drying.
Can't get her out my head
The scent of love is haunting me
The pain is really getting deep
suffocating disbelieves.
" Love so fragile"
"Love so fragile"
Heart is pumping too much blood
Veins are really crying
Blood is overloading
Sorrows Keep pouring.
"Du pain of love"
"Du pain of love"
Can't get her out my head
The scent of love is haunting me
The pain is really getting deep
suffocating disbelieves.

Reviews

[FlOeTrY22]

Wow. This is amazing. I loved it.

[luviva]

this is coooll!!!! u r a great poet

[Hayley Anderton]

This is lovely! And quite relatable, which I think is good in poetry. Nice one :)

[Angelica Marie]

Very nice expression! It flows smoothly. Love is sometimes a sad thing, but it makes some of the best poetry!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the flow of thoughts and the feel of heart break in the poem. Love make us song writer's. The ending made this poem complete. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Nicole Ann.]

i relate to this so much.

[Baby Ricochet]

Good rhythm. Great job

[Sukhmeet Singh]

Very bright at how love is haunting you

[Mark]

This poem moves very well, it exposes raw emotions and a universal experience. (well for those of us who have a heart anyway)

Enjoyed the read and can so ooo relate!