colours

typical "me" poem; words floating from my brain into a poem

watching the yellow bellied bird

float away into the horizon

arrow turns green

left, go

toward the yellow flowers

under the yellow horizon, hazy and blank

as a mind under cloth

covered in white

headache, charming thunder skies

picnics so long in the hills

leaving yellow bellied birds

floating into the horizon

Author's Note

Brutal honesty, please :]

Reviews

[S.E. Conway]

i like this, it is short sweet and to the fuzzi colour filled pioint ^.^ i like your writting, karina, it makes me giggiel. have you been on bradstars myspace? the song on it makes me sad, it makes me miss all of you guyses smiling faces...

[Jacquelene Vanessa More..]

your like me i don't want ppl telling oh wow that was awesome! hah i'm nice. this was a colorful read your title fit it perfectly i like the consistant rhymn and vivid descriptions i wanted to pet the little yellow bird tweet tweet!