colours

colours

A Poem by Karina
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typical "me" poem; words floating from my brain into a poem

"

watching the yellow bellied bird

float away into the horizon

arrow turns green

left, go

toward the yellow flowers

under the yellow horizon, hazy and blank

as a mind under cloth

covered in white

headache, charming thunder skies

picnics so long in the hills

leaving yellow bellied birds

floating into the horizon

© 2008 Karina


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Karina
Brutal honesty, please :]

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i like this, it is short sweet and to the fuzzi colour filled pioint ^.^ i like your writting, karina, it makes me giggiel. have you been on bradstars myspace? the song on it makes me sad, it makes me miss all of you guyses smiling faces...

Posted 16 Years Ago


your like me i don't want ppl telling oh wow that was awesome! hah i'm nice. this was a colorful read your title fit it perfectly i like the consistant rhymn and vivid descriptions i wanted to pet the little yellow bird tweet tweet!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 15, 2008
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Karina
Karina

San Francisco, CA



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A Poem by Karina