this is nice and i almost enjoyed the beginning, i think this reads
better as an insight or an essay, but with lack of depth it reads
dreary and kinda boring, and doesnt appeal to me personally,
but thats not to say that others wouldnt like it.
i think if it you took more time and the wording was choice,
i would read the entire story instead of losing interest after the first
few lines. let me know if you revise it.
Reading this prose poem, i feel that you're living in an Utopian world, which will never exist. I'll admit that the dark nature of most newscast, turn me off, too. But, it can also be used, as tool of mercy and light. As witnessed, after the 2004 Tsunami, in Asia. Sadly, it's the dark nature of newscast, which draws the viewers and just the advertising, paying for the 30/60/90 minute telecast. Thank you, for sharing this poem with us.
Your words reflect a kind hearted person who wishes all of the evil would go away. Sadly, we live in a world ruled by the flesh. Praise God this life is just a stepping stone into what will be forever. If more people had your point of view, wishing for peace, we could achieve that in a whole.
I enjoyed reading your emotional rant here. Good job!
It seems like everyone is always interested in getting in other's business,
Yet when it is your business, you wish everyone would keep to themselves.
Many understand it, few embrace it.
We do have television news shows to partly thank for desensitizing minds everywhere.
I do really like this piece, a lot!
Sorry for all of my unnecessary rambling....
You have a kind heart and a big one at that... just feeling the pain through your words makes me realize that I too feel the same way. There is so much hate in this world, it sometimes makes me wonder why I am still here. There is so much I want to do but such little can be done or will be done. I really enjoyed reading this and I appreciate you sharing it with me. Well done my dear.
we'd all like to see peace. unfortantly it may never come. its all port of human nature. greed, teritoral and sumtimes even th nead to kill. unforently thats wut makes us human. and th unendind nead to b on top. theres a dark side to all of us. a dival in all of us. anyway... nice job. its vrry true. keap up th great work
luv ya
ur friend Aileen
People crashing in cars or planes,places and people getting robbed everyday
all the killing is so insane.
Gangs feeling they need to fight using knives and guns,just to state a point and have their fun.
In the event they end up hurting themselves and innocent ones.
We can be just driving down the street ,out of the blue someone starts honking at you
all you see is their lips moving and thier flipping you the birdie.
Maybe because your going to slow or their just angry who knows.
YOUR WHOLE POEM IS JUST A WONDE PEICE THAT YOU WROTE BUT THIS IS WHAT STOOD OUT TO ME THE MOST CAUSE YOU ARE RIGHT ABOUT THE BAD THIS YOU HEAR ON THE NEWS AND THE BAD THING THAT PEOPLE DO...YOU ALWAYS KNOW HOW T BRING FORTH A GREAT POEM WITH A GREAT MIND...KOODO'S
Aw, this was really beautiful! Indeed, u hit it right on the head here. I hate watching the news as well. It's the same ole' thing anyways. That's why i have a computer to just give me updates about stuff. I dont need to listen for an entire hour or more for them only showing nothing but depressing events lol. I wished that there wasnt any violence in this world, too. Who needs it anyway? Nobody needs to die, or to be homeless, or be poor. I wish i was a billionaire so i can help this damn world of ours, and save what's left of it hehe. Wonderful poem!!!!