Needy

This is about the poor and needy.

The  birds are flying in the air 

 

The people are sitting in nightmare 

 

The breeze is blowing in the west  

 

But these people dont have any place to rest 

 

Cruel is the time which plays their way 

 

Let the clock stop and show them,the light of ray!!  

 

Their hearts are still so hollow 

 

With the veins of poor blood which is hardly red 

 

And their sorrows are still not shallow.

Everyday is not what they think

And its harder for their eyes to even blink.

Having so much,and we even complain

With the empty hearts and what they have is only pain.

 

Lucky are the poeple who say money is not all,

Ask these poeople they know the real truth of all.

Author's Note

Thank you for your time...!!

Reviews

[Vikrantsingh]

Wonderful and really touching my friend love it from start till end :)
amazing :)
- Singh :)

[karan kotabagi]

Thank you very much Vikrant bro...i really feel honoured to get such a nice review from you...:-):-)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're welcome mate :) stay blessed :D

[bookworm0812]

This connects really well to the reader. It makes you think about the world a little bit deeper, and it makes you think of how much is really had by people, and how much other people need, and don't complain.

[karan kotabagi]

ya .....tats wat i intend for readers to know and connect to these people.....and a thanks a ton for your review....:):)

[bookworm0812]

Of course! Happy to share my opinion.

[Prritiy]

a touching write, showing your humanly kindness. liked it.

[karan kotabagi]

Thank you prritiy.....:):)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)