Men in Arms

This ones dedicated to the men who fight in war.....i respect my country and the people who protect it.

They live to serve the country 

With their determined minds  

And strong hands,fights for a cause

In a furious chaos,without a single pause.

They are the ones,who give their blood

They are the ones,who fall cold and save our blood

In a fearful night,all along thy will fight

Till their death,and their last breath they will give their blood;

Of all and every,they save the lives

Of among are thousand tribes;

Put their life on line

To save our life every time,and give us time for our wine.

They live their live,to give us a good loft,

Save our blood and don't leave us at our start;

Hold the country,with their hands; 

And at last they make a great place for the beautiful minds. 

Reviews

[Ankit Mahar]

Amazing poem to inspire and I personally recommend you to try sending it to some newspaper or magazine

[karan kotabagi]

Thanx a lot Ankit....and also thank u for ur sugesstion bro.....:):):)

[Prritiy]

very nice! salute to your spirit.
written nicely, liked it a lot.

[karan kotabagi]

Thanx a lot prritiy very happy to see your review.

[Prritiy]

you are welcome.