Ode on my country

This is the first brilliant piece of creativity I have ever written. this is a poem where I felicitate my country in the form of an ode. Hope you enjoy it. JAI HIND!!!!!

From all the countries in the world,

Thou art the magnificient

My life to Thee I lend, even if I am too old,

The whole world near Thee will bend.

Oh mother! I come to you,

I come to Thee in Thy safe arms,

For all the deeds I do,

Guide me and protect me from all harms.

I admire each drop of water on Thine,

And every flow of sand,

I admire every flow of wind on Thine,

And every grass on Thy land.

Thou art the mother of all,

Who live on you and depend on you,

I can hear the voice Thee call,

Which guides us when any work we do.

Ye had given birth to Patrioties,

Who art now in Thy safe arms,

Send more such patrioties,

So that we may never fear harm.

Thou art magnificient; Thou art great,

Thou art more greater than others,

I have no more words to say, thou art so great,

Thou art brilliant than others.

                                         -Karan Ashara

Author's Note

The independence day of INDIA is only days ahead. So it is the right moment to felicitate our country INDIA in the form of an ode.

Reviews

[Mary Bosworth]

Why the 16th century words in a modern poem? They do not fit