A Long Long Time Ago

Her smell,

 still in bed.
She's just
a memory, 
               that i had.

Author's Note

Give me your thoughts and opinions. Also, if you see any grammar issue or misspell, let me know, help me improve my english.

Reviews

[emipoemi]

Short but powerfully profound! You say a whole lot in so few words. WOW! Well done! No grammar/spelling issues at all, even.

[kaoswithak]

Thank you! I just discovered there were contests and decided to give it a shot. This contest as a limit of 12 words, i wanted to write "that i ONCE had" but then there would be 13 words instead of 12. Anyways, glad you enjoyed it.

[emipoemi]

Contests are fun, aren't they? Good luck!
(yeah...."once" would have ruined it, to be honest. It sounds so much better without).

[kaoswithak]

Glad the contest it's 12 words maximum instead of 13! Ahah