MY SOUL

NOTHING JUST LOOKING INSIDE MY BODY AND FIND IT

MY SOUL

(STORY BEHIND MY OWN SOUL)

 

I AM A BODY, AND EXIST.

I AM INSIDE THE BODY, AND CAN'T SEEN.

I AM A SOUL, AND CAN BE MOULD.

WHAT AM I THAN.

 

YOU ARE NOTHING WITHOUT ME.

BUT I AM EVERYTHING WITHOUT YOU.

YOU ARE CARING, BUT I NEED MORE.

YOU FORGOT YOUR CREATOR BUT HOW CAN I.

 

YOU FORGOT YOUR TASK IN THIS WORLD BUT HOW CAN I.

YOU IGNORE ME WHEN I NEED YOU, MEANS CAN PURE ME.

YOU TAKES ME WITH YOU EVERYWHERE,BUT YOU TREAT ME LIKE A MARKET ITEM.

WHAT OTHER TRY TO SHOW YOU, YOU MOULDED.

 

BUT WHAT I HAD BEEN TRYING TO SHOW YOU.

YOU ARE IGNORING.

ONE DAY WILL COME WHEN THERE WILL BE NO BODY OF YOU.

AND I WILL LAUGH AND THANKS MY CREATOR TO GET ME AWAY FROM YOU.

 

“AND I WILL NEVER ALLOW YOU TO UNPURE ME MORE FOR THE SAKE OF THIS FOOL WORLDLY PEOPLE APPRECIATION”

Author's Note

IDEA ABOUT MY VIEW AND JUST GIVE ME THE SENSE YOU GET IT FROM MY POETRY
IF GRAMMAR ERRORS ARE THERE,TELL ME MUST APPRECIATE

Reviews

[Valentine]

A deep sad write. yes there are grammar errors but the meaning of your poem is clear. Valentine

[FREE_BIRD]

i like to know...i will try to improve.
thanks

[K. Bridgid]

Wow this is very powerful and sad. It is always sad when someone is not what you need and sometimes it's hard to find the right words.

[FREE_BIRD]

thanks for the word and gets me correct.

[FREE_BIRD]

thanks for review....
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