This is My Box

This is a children's poem that I wrote last year.

What
could be,
inside my box?
We
shall
open it up
and see,
after all,
it could be
a
fox.
But I doubt
there would
be
a fox
in my box,
for my box,
it belongs to
me,
and holds
my grey socks.

Author's Note

Open to anything except grammar and/or punctuation because I have my style of speaking and that is how I write. Thanks!

Reviews

[Zelle]

I enjoyed how it proceeded! defintly a gud read for children! :)

[Patrick O'Neil]

I like it. It has a good build, rhyme and flow. I personal would have like to see maybe one or more verse to it, but as childrens poem, short and sweet is best. Very nice poem, keep writing.. would like to see what else you have.