"Eternal Pleasure"

Sorry I wrote this really fast before work:/

The boy's first love.

 

His firsts sweet feeling of love's arm,

brushing his innocent skin.

New emotions rush to his head,

then to his toes.

Every inch of him is engulfed in pure tranquility.

As he comes to realize the truth of what has happened to him.

 

A beautiful woman had accepted him,

for being him.

 

Her eyes,

her smile,

each and every sweet word she speaks,

sent exhilerating chills down his spine.

 

Every waking moment he wishes he could feel her presence,

her sweet smell through his nostrils,

her soft hands on his;

fingers intertwining,

reassuring that she was there;

not just another dream.

 

This boy's first love,

 

The perfect tranquilty that so many search for,

coming at the perfect moment,

with the perfect memories,

with the perfect girl.

This goddess of a woman,

who acheives the greatest gift;

 

Giving unconditonal love and acceptance.

 

Reviews

[Impulse]

Beautiful =]

[Lexi =]]

Aww very sweet poem. I love it

[Tina Kline]

This is a great poem. Very innocent and yet very romantic at the same time.
Like it a lot.