"Eventually"

Time is enduring the silent speaking,

feeling and fighting an eternity of pain,

suffering.

Time is what remains between you and I,

The dark gap,

restricting happiness.

Time is walking the edge of the enemy.

It is our duty to cross that impossible trench of darkness to reach our

destiny,

our fate.

Trapped on the side of evil and crime,

we can do nothing,

but wait...

Reviews

[Octob3r Star]

It made perfect sense. ;) Cheers

[Ethan]

the words were poorly chosen. Has potential, though

[Lunar Lightning]

In all honesty, this poem made little to no sense to me at all... It flows rather ok, but the words were poorly chosen. Has potential, though. So just add some emotion and make it make some more sense and you're totally clear.

Luna