"Talk to Me"

When we talk

My heart pauses so that I can hear your voice.

Whe I see your face

Time Stands still So I can absorb your beauty.

When I see your name written

I picture those big hypnotizong eyes.

When I look into your eyes I get lost.

 

When I look

I am looking through the window to your soul

Hoping you will unlock the door.

So big.

So beautiful.

So full of life.

These are emotions that cannot be hidden.

I need to get them out and know if there is a chance.

That slight chance.

That you would catch me.

Be my light in this dark tunnel and help me find my way back home.

Reviews

[johnny]

Very well done.

I wouldnt change a thing

[mae-mae<3]

Not one of your best but very clever. The first four lines were the best. Very lovely.