"Safe Landing"

55 words.

 

 

The movie set was ready. The amateur stunt man in place. His adrenaline was pumping and his nerves setting in. He was all prepared to jump from the twenty story building. The film starts rolling, stunt man running, window crashing. He is plummeting fast, then he looks down. 

Someone forgot to set up the landing.

 

Reviews

[C.L. Wilson]

LOL. yeah I wouldn't call this a story but if you put it in a poem form than it would definitely be a lot more enjoyable to read, well it was in the first place but it would be even more so if you do put it in poem form...aw I'm just ranting.

[C.L. Wilson]

LOL. yeah I wouldn't call this a story but if you put it in a poem form than it would definitely be a lot more enjoyable to read, well it was in the first place but it would be even more so if you do put it in poem form...aw I'm just ranting.