"Who Did It?"

55 words....

There lay a mangled body; wounds that resembled stab marks in his torso. Parts of his neck had been completely removed.

            “Amazing! Not even as much as a clue!”

            “It doesn’t add up.”

            “This was one sick guy."

As they talk, a dog skulked by behind them, blood trickling from its sharp, blood stained teeth.

Reviews

Very good story, for it being as short as it was. Watch your tenses in the last part, though. You have it in present and past tense.

[Rhiannon Dragonraine]

Awesome Job. You have managed to draw me in to the story and conclude it all in 55 words I have to say that I am impressed. There is also good description and a definite end to the story as well Good Job!