"Grounded"

This is another 55 word story:) These are about death, but I'm not a phsyco or anything. lol

 

“How many times do I have to tell you, no hitting! You’re grounded.”

            “You suck!”

            “A week.”

            “What?!”

            She pressed on.

            “A month.”

            “Come on!”

            “I could go on and on.”

            “You’re going to regret that.”

            “We’ll see.” She said, not knowing that the 11 year old boy knows where his dad keeps his gun.

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[Stephanie]

"We'll see." She said, not knowing that the 11 year old boy knows where his dad keeps his gun.

And isn't that a scary thought? 55 words go by quickly. Loved this :)