truely disturbed

Bothered, frequently disturbed, and uneasy about the over all outcome of what is going to happen

is it love? or infatuation?

is it resentment? or hate?

Lord, knows theres an uneasy feeling

a disease you may call it

with an everyday symptoms such as depression, stress, and loss of hair

medication won't cure you

Emancipation from the world is the only cure

nobody wants to contract it.

Is it incurable?

such as HIV,AIDS, and other ailments?

the man you love gave you such a horrible disease

An aftermath of soon to come

Doctors can't cure it

you may think people look at you as a monster

but your not a monster

your just dealing with a broken heart

 

 

 

Reviews

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

AAAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's sweet!! But sad! I enjoyed your build up to it and I can see people reading this and completely relating to it. Great write, nice rhythm and flow.....

[Marvin Lewis Jr.]

I like the way this builds up, a very thought-provoking poem written from an uncommon yet beautifully artistic vantage-point.

I enjoyed reading!