Good sheep

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

for the happiness of shephered

joined in the flock

the disappeared sheep

 

 

....Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram.

Reviews

[Jade]

Nicely shown in effective imagery. Love it.

[Clockwork]

That is a good way of describing the journey of Christ. Instead of separating himself from the flock, he is depicted as joining it which joins his spirit to all people. Nice connection, my friend.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very good image you've given us with this poem, looks kinda "biblical"

[Dark Poetry]

A very good poem, a work about the lost meeting a life of salvation.

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Your sentence- fathomless- amazing :)

[ some typo-errors, correct them :) ]

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

this time i understood it again.... keep writing pal

[Suditi]

I am not sure, if i get correctly.
It means that, for shepherd's sake alone, the sheep follow him in a flock, losing their own identity, right?

[Jordan]

Short and sweet and to the point. :)

[Alpris]

Very nice. It's cryptic, yet somewhat soothing but simple.
Well done.

[$êlvån]

sweet n simple...nyc 1 ............i am getting ur way of poems :)