The oasis

The oasis

A Poem by Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

even in the sea of sorrows
as the oasis in the deserts...
a few sweet happenings
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          ............Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram

© 2012 Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram


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I saw the oasis in the deserts. They are miracle for the heart and eyes. A beautiful poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well penned. Love the comparison.

Posted 12 Years Ago


All is rich, when richly imagery makes it for us rich to read.
Thank you friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


deep, honestly i can't catch all its meaning even though i've read it several times, anyway i can see you've done a very nice job here :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very very nice.
The contrast of hot dry desert and ageless sea of sorrows. Loved this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


great comparison........ the wet seas n the dry sand but both r lonely

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like the comparison between the sea of sorrows and the desert oasis. It shows that good things can visit us even when times are difficult. This poem is like an oasis in a land of barren words. Regards, my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


we must have the lows to appreciate the highs... nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


This almost is similar to a proverb. Kind of like looking at the silver lining in a cloud. I really, really like this one! Thanks! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram
Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

Chennai, India



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