Is there any address?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Is there any address?

Is there any colour?

Is there any figure?

Is there any fence?

Yes....there is nothing!

But having the power of life...

It gives sustainable status to all!

I love the wind always!

 

.........Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram.

 

Reviews

[Alpris]

You're such a powerful poet. This has so many hidden meanings to it, but the one I'm stuck on is, the way you choose to shape and live your life is the way it shall be and you should indulge in that. The wind is like a graceful set of fingers beckoning you to your destiny. Beautiful write!

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem and the artwork gave life to the words. To enjoy life and dance with the wind allow us to know the feeling of freedom and peace. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Jade]

Very nicely put. Love the ending.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very well written, good use of anaphora (is there any) and oxymoron (yes - nothing)

[Clockwork]

My favorite lines in this poem are "But having the power of life.../It gives sustainable status to all!" The idea that all things have ability and power because they contain a piece of the every glowing spark of universal energy is truly inspiring.

I was a little confused with the last line. I am not totally sure that it needs to be there, especially given the power of the two lines before it. I would suggest removing it ad ending the poem with the lines which proceed it.

[Suditi]

But having the power of life...
It gives sustainable status to all!

Such powerful lines.
Being able to breathe alone, makes us all equal in a great way.
The boundaries are secondary.
A beautiful write.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Nothing needed but the air I breathe...........

[AK]

Nice poem! Though I didn't completely understand it:)