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Living with greenery

Always identify the way to

The Global sustainability

 

..........Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram.

Reviews

[SUGATA M]

Many write lines after lines but still the feeling remains obscure and hazy to make the poem finally a kind of intellectual masturbation. Sundaramji, your 2-3 lines can actually equivalent to an epic, the way you present your message and feeling with a cocktail of a few very strong words. That's where your crdibility as a poet lies. Very few has the ability of yours. And many get confused after reading your lines. I just pity them as they fail to understand actually the basic essence of poetry itself.

[Coyote Poetry]

I'm 1/2 Ojibwa. I believe we must love the green earth. We need her more then she needs us. Poem make a very strong and important point. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very nice, i like the touch of "modernity" you gave to this haiku, sometimes just a modern lexic (like verse 3) can be enough to evoque the idea of modernity, which in this haiku suits perfectly with nature (verse 1), verse 2 works well as a bridge between the two :)
Quick tip: delete that "the" in the last verse, it's useless and not in harmony with the poem's metrica
Good job

[Clockwork]

How badly we need to remember this in our current state. There is so much pollution in our world. Oil hardly seems like the answer to our problems and we are not developing many good solutions. We only have one earth. Thank you for reminding me, my friend.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

simply lovely ..........

[Suditi]

Wow picture again.
A very strong message.
Thought provoking.

[$êlvån]

wat kind of poem(anything) u write??....read ur profile but i guess its too short n non poetic(in any case)..

[$êlvån]

wat kind of poem(anything) u write??....read ur profile but i guess its too short n non poetic(in any case)..

[AK]

Nice poem! I loved that you decided to spread awareness about global warming with this poem. However, I think I found a tinsie winsie typing error, I think you typed 'greenary' instead of 'greenery'. Other than that I loved the poem! Keep writing!