the dearest one....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Even our destiny is faraway

It will be the dearest one...

I too need wings to fly!

 

   ........Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram

 

 

Reviews

[Clockwork]

How that one shall set us free even as we wear the irons of bondage. This reminds me of my own dear one. However, I am waiting for the angels and the spirits of the fores to come again and visit the quiet regions of the earth. That is where my final comfort lies. A beautiful poem, my friend.

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope for Angels to quiet the anger and violence too. A beautiful statue giving hope to the eye that look upon. Thank you for the beautiful words and artwork.
Coyote

[Alpris]

Wow!
I think this is one of my favourite haikus from you. Implying that your lover is an angel :) and you're willing to go the extra mile to be with her.
Very nicely done.

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

nice lines!!! but please try to include meaning of the lines which u actually thought as an additional information.......thanku

[Suditi]

The last line took my breath away.
Amazing poem.

[SUGATA M]

Unbelievable, how can you write those fewer lines that carry enough materials to twist the heart?

[AK]

Awesome poem! I loved the metaphors used in it! Keep writing!