The Unity

The Sky enjoying 

The unity in journey 

The Seagulls

..........Kaa.Na.Kalyanasundaram.

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I like how you suggest that the sky enjoys the fact that the seagulls are flying through it. That shows that they sky has the ability to perceive and that it lives and interacts with the flock of birds, which intensifies the sense of unity in this haiku.

[Katelyn]

You expressed so much in just a few words. Excellent work. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem and image.

[Sahar moonlight]

Perfect description :)
Really beautiful.
And the photo was awesome

[Mockingbird]

an acute observation in nature. it goes perfectly with the stunning picture. shows that they are in sync with one another in migration and that in itself is a miracle.

[AK]

Wow! Your Haikus are really really good! I loved it!

[Nautili]

There is something so clean about haiku, it says so much in so few words. I liked all the ones I read and will revisit to read more when time permits.

[Emerald Seas]

I like the imagery this brings forth. I picture sand, waves, and blue waters, with seagulls flying high above.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Simple beautiful imagery, makes me think of being on one of the many beaches here in Michigan.

[hmm]

This is so lovely, I enjoyed the simplicity of this.

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

I could imagine this, off the coast of Pondicherry maybe ;-) Well done.