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with powerful future

in the electric wire

the hanging kite

 

 

........Kaa. Na. Kalyanasundaram

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

Kaa Na,this is a great haiku, done with much thought and flair!

Very artistic!

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Thanking much for your esteemed comment. My best enquiries to all the family members.

[Leslie Philibert]

It takes a lot of poetic energy and thought to compress thought and feeling into
a Haiku.You do it excellently.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

thanking u much for your review Mr.Hotwater

[Hotwater]

It does have the appearance of "electric wires"... at first glance, or more study brings the electric across the sky.
*bird*