Unfurl your wings

 

 

 

 

Thinking always good...
For the human society!
Worshiping the God...
In the smile of poor!
A winning champion of humanity!

Guiding the others...
In the right path of life!
The success stories of your followers...
Will fill the heart with joy!
It is the heavenly entrance!

Yes...see your shoulders
Wings are budding!
Now....It has grown...grown...grown!
Unfurl the wings now!
You can fly in the sky !

 

...........Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words open the door to thoughts. I believe a righteous person give and assist without the purpose of change. The real Angels are the people who give hope and food/medicine without the purpose of reward. Good to fly with Angels when love and kindness is the reason. Thank you for the excellent poem.
coyote

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

I am very much happy about your good review. Your thoughts are so good for the humanity. Thanking U.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

A very beautiful poem with a strong and positive message :) Helping others as a way of workshiping God and filling our own hearts with joy !
Loved it =D

[Tate Morgan]

We all hope by the time we reach the end that we can say we have grown

[Dr. Wood ?]

Worshipping the God in the smile of the poor...Brilliant! Humanity could do with a champion...

[pumpkin head]

wow so very nicely written adnd expressed. like this

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Thanking U much for the nice review.

[Wendy Seames Garner]

I see you have taken flight yourself. A different style of writing than I am use to from you, but very nice. Some very good thoughts here.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Yes, I have written these lines for the younger generation to have motivation towards the social service. Thanking U for your esteemed review.

[MOON]

Lovely write the colour of the text makes it soar.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Thanking U, I will change the colour as you wish.

[MOON]

No apology meant the colour enhances the writing ,please don't change

[Jordan]

This one was well written. I love the drama of this piece and the excitement that seems to be pouring from your keyboard (I would say, "pen", but you didn't write this with a pen on here lol). Wonderful writing.

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

Thanking U much. Your review is encouraging me to write more. With regards.