HAIKU FRAGRANCE

HAIKU FRAGRANCE

A Poem by Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram
"

The real life experiences

"

*Like a steam bearing

Soft feathered flowers...

The pregnant ladies!

 

*Don't say nothing

Atleast offer a.....

handful of flowers!

 

*Windows always opened

The soft wind spreads...

The sweet memories of life!

 

......Ka Na Kalyanasundaram....

 

 

© 2009 Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram


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really superb haiku.
i really love it.

Posted 15 Years Ago
I just read your poem and it could be a great Haiku. It has the wrong syllable count. 5-7-5 is the syllable count for Haikus. However, what I have read is really good. Just fix the syllable count.

Posted 15 Years Ago
Much depth in this poem, as well as emotional impact. Great!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram
Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram

Chennai, India



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I am very glad to enrol in your web. I am a Haiku poet. My poems are already published in the name of ' The Smile Humanity' - poems with humanity behaviour. I received an award of " Pavendar Award" .. more..

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