WITH A PIECE OF CHARCOAL

This is a real life of a street artist.

 

WITH A PIECE OF CHARCOAL

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 Dirty dress with patches

But he is not a clown!

 The strengthless eyes ,

 Concentrating  the pavement!

The long handled torned bag;

Contains pieces of chalk and charcoals!

Sitting besides his lovely colourful art;

With vanished smile on his face!

 Stoppers watch for an appreciation...

But not recognising the artist!

The dropped coins are dancing

On the lovely drawing

 

With devotional culture!

Wheather he has catched...

The bread for the day or not;

But  still he is searching ...

A good wall of society,

To draw his art of life !

...........................Ka Na Kalyanasundaram..............

 

 

Author's Note

I need your researched comments

Reviews

[Floornine]

Some of your words are very awkward (without clean, shrinked, with vanished, torned, catched...). It makes for an interesting style if polished a little more, but if it was done unintentionally, you might want to take some classes or read a book on the english language.
It's a nice scene though, and it could be very good with a little editting.