He and Me

The poem is self explanatory!

I see an Ambitious boy in me,
who just wants to be free,
having dreams in his eyes,
tries to come out, even when I pee..

Suppressed by others, he suffers
to do something big, and glitter,
'follow his dreams' is all he wants to do,
it's my life s***ers, who the hell are YOU?

'What will happen if he doesn't succeed?'
It's my life, I AM ready to take the risk!
Money is nothing but a piece of sh*t,
in his definition of 'success', it doesn't fit..

His dreams are ruined,
by the people's 'conservatism,'
they are so, so cruel,
to someone's priceless 'ambition..'

I see an ambitious boy in me,
who wants to follow his dreams,
you have to trust him and me,
he is not as incapable as he seems..

He just wants to follow his dreams. . . . .

Author's Note

It isn't as good as I've expected.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Really true and from your heart...
Good work.

[Pratik]

Nice one.. :) Its so true. I think the society by and large isn't ready to come out of this make-belief world were most people believe there are only a few things to do that can be considered worthwhile.. and as a child grows up these misconceptions are often thrust upon him. It is nice for you to have painted the story without beating about the bush.. :)

[RISHABH ARORA]

aww !!! nice work man !! :D

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Releasing the inner child to seek its dream is difficult in a grown up world.

[Amila Jay]

Awesome write, very true indeed:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem that open the door to many questions. Great dreams are done by brave people. To live a fearless life and do what you desire. Few will try. The easy road of work and money will take the most of us. I like the way you described the desire for dreams. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote