Once Upon A Time, I Love You

The speaker falls in love with the writer

Once upon a time,

You picked me up

You saw my soul,

Once upon a time.

I love you, 

Though I we have never meet officially,

Though we likely will never together be,

I love you.

Time and time again, 

Through hardships you've seen me.

Through thick and thin,

time and time again.

I love you,

Though there is no way to run across each other.

Though I will never know if my unlikely love is requited ,

I love you

Sometimes,

You ensured I come out the other end.

You reassured me that I have purpose,

Sometimes.

I love you,

Though my story seems short and I seem inadequate 

Though it makes my cry myself to sleep,

I love you.

The end

Only comes when your interest stops

Only comes after despair… 

Before our tears that will try to fill the rip in our heart start to pour,

The end.

Author's Note

Inspired by http://www.grammarly.com/blog/2014/would-you-read-it-explain-in-the-comments/
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