Will you be mine?

I am no good at this

but there is no way I am going to miss

my chance with you girl,

you make me wanna whirl.

Right now I am just dreaming

And my heart is just a screaming

watching you walk away

so it is judgement day...

Will you be mine?

Cause damn you shine...

You make me breathless

and I feel so helpless.

I know it is a longshot

but my heart is tied in a knot

I don't even consider myself handsome

sometimes I even feel like a phantom

But when you're around

It is hands down

my favorite endeavor

with no displeasure.

Reviews

[Hunter C. Brown]

i good poem. very heartfelt