If I Were Brave

If I Were Brave

A Poem by ~Kali~
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Some of the things I would do/have done if I were a brave soul.

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Being brave is something
That people think is good
But I can't say I'm one of them...

If I were brave, I would take risks
Some that could even cost my life
Luckily, I'm not
Because it's damn expensive

If I were brave, I would run away
Run until my vision is blurry
Luckily, I'm not
Because I would have no place to go

If I were brave, I would scar myself
Until red was all I could see
Luckily, I'm not
Because my skin is already bad enough

If I were brave, I would have told my friends goodbye
For today is the day of my death
Luckily, I'm not
Because I still have a life to live

If I were brave, I would already be dead
I would be a pretty angel
Luckily, I'm not
Because I'm just not ready to go home yet

© 2016 ~Kali~


Author's Note

~Kali~
There is a swear word in this poem

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Thought provoking, we all think of this at some stage in our life no matter how strong we are... There is a lovely balance of two types of thoughts in the which compliments the whole poem... It's a lovely work... Bravery does not mean don't fear, it simply means we are still moving in spite of having fear....

Sincerely,
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~Kali~

8 Years Ago

Thank you! And I love that last part, so true :)



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You clarified the narrow line between bravery and being mad(doing something foolish then) very well. It's a very good piece of writing.


Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~Kali~

8 Years Ago

Thanks! And yeah, people often thing that just because you do something stupid (e.g. jumping off a h.. read more
Thought provoking, we all think of this at some stage in our life no matter how strong we are... There is a lovely balance of two types of thoughts in the which compliments the whole poem... It's a lovely work... Bravery does not mean don't fear, it simply means we are still moving in spite of having fear....

Sincerely,
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~Kali~

8 Years Ago

Thank you! And I love that last part, so true :)
Bravery can mean running away, or standing still; swinging back harder or just rolling with the punches. An easy, gently-flowing read, set at a comfortable pace - which sits at odds with the theme of the writing itself, but that's not a bad thing. Keep writing, Kali! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

~Kali~

8 Years Ago

You have a very good point! And thanks, I certainly will :)

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Added on April 19, 2016
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~Kali~
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