Friend's Trust

I wrote this a long time ago, but it still means a lot to me.

Friend’s Trust

I am sorry for all the bad things I've done

Especially to drain the trust from someone

As special as you are to me

Even if you don’t agree.

 

Every time they were good intentions,

But they always turned into bad extensions

To the torturous life we live today

And so I am sorry, hope to see you some day.

Reviews

[Pax]

there are times, that friendship is put into a test, the test of trust. MOre often the world works in crazy wonders, the society works in numbers and much controlled manner. If somehow this letter will be sent to this friend, things will turn out differently, friends always do understand each other despite the broken trust, it can always be repaired. very nice work.

[David Scott]

Learning to say I am sorry is a very big step in life. Many never learn this skill. It is needed to have trust with any relationship.

I can see you r heart was in this Kalen.

[Ajmal]

so short poem but with an appealing effect. theme is great and conveyed beautifully.

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong and honest and direct poem. We do abuse and use people who we should be thankful for. I like the tone and the reasons for the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote