No Better

I was feeling down after someone ruined my mind. This was the product of that night.

No Better

I may have made some mistakes

But at least I try to brighten the world that I make

And don’t you see

That you’re no better than me

Reviews

[Ghost of Jupiter]

All we can do is learn from our mistakes and not let others make us feel less for having made them. Mistakes are proof that we are trying, if one can't see that then they can f-off, in my humble opinion. Don't let anyone ruin your mind... It is beautiful, and so is this write.

[Kalen Luciano]

This comment is beautiful especially when you say mistakes are proof that we are trying. I never thought of it that way before. Thanks for the review.

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Any time, keep your head up, Kalen.

[redzone]

The only time we don't make mistakes is when we are dead. And, I think that dying is the biggest mistake of all.. er.. well, ditto Ks comment.. thanks for the read Kalen... ~~redzone

[Eric Pudalov]

Hey Kalen...I like this one a lot. Its shortness and simplicity are real strengths. It implies a lot of what's going on, and I can feel that there's a conflict, but it's not necessary to tell everything. Very good job!