ode to you

friendship may last forever
love is to soon at all
fear should faze you never
tears are here to fall

darkness has forgotten
so stars twinkle not
here you lay in your slumber soastrut
limbs are pulled from the body’s lock

your casket built from your timber
so your body could peacefully lye
trying not to stir you from your slumber
as for i could not afford to dye

Reviews

[Canicus]

I like it has a perfect ending good job bro