kill your girl child !

It is satirical poem based on condition of women in India

Kill your girl child

Kill her because this world is wild

Kill her because there is no place for her in society

Kill her because she is going to be eve teased 

Kill her because she might be raped

Kill her because she has no choice of marriage

Kill her because she might fall in love

Kill her because she has to wear what wont seduce men

Kill her because her husband might beat her

Kill her because she might get divorced

Kill her because she go mad out of depression

Kill her because she might depend on you or him

Kill her because she might study and be wiser than her man

that he might have inferiority complex

As she has no right and say in her decisions 

It is high time to understand 

that she might be a stain 

Kill her before it pains

Kill your girl child...!! 

Author's Note

Its just a little effort to describe that it is hard out there for women. If you really like it please review it...

Reviews

[zainul]

Kazal,your frustration and anger have correctly identified the inhumane attitude of our society.
Let's denounce all culprits(both men and women) who are responsible for such rude treatments
to girls.
Let's also support those people who are sincerely striving to overcome the situation.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Muskan Shaikh]

Osum kajal...I'm really proud of u...May ur dreams Co.e true...love u r talent

[Cat]

I agree with the intensity women are faced with today. Wonderful

[h d e rushin]

I understand this more than I should, I think.

wonderfully written...dana

[dopey]

like it a lot! love the twist with the humour/irony - it emphasized your message :)

[The Hampstead Poet]

I can understand your anger, I myself cannot believe the injustice in this world for women. It angers me to no end that, as a women, I can't wear what I want or stop my body being sexualized by people who have no right. That people exist in this world who think that women have less right than men, that women consent through their clothes and are defined by their bodies, not their minds. Thank you for sharing your frustration at this, I really enjoyed reading your expression of this inequality. It is good to know we have a voice to combat things like this, and by writing this, you can use your voice, and draw attention to women's issues.

[Parul Sharma]

i could feel angry wit every word ...india can be tough sometimes

[PANDORA]

I read the other reviews and I get the theme of being trapped by religion and/or society standards, however, this spoke to me personally and not because of religion or society but because I feel the inevitable coffin and there is nothing I can do about it. Thank you for a great and powerful read.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes, unfortunately, women are tossed away, considered as forgive my words...but some actually consider women as if they are here to serve, full fill desires, and take all insults without a single word. You expressed this oppression, very well. But i must tell you, that works that include killing, and such will not be approved in the group. It would be if it was only in the title and maybe on another place somewhere in the poem, but just looking at it....well, too much KILL words. But, do submit somethin else. :) 100 points.

[Kajal Sharma]

I am sorry i didnt know that

[Dani The Unreviewed]

It is no problem...i forgot to tell you in person...but it is noted in the group description.

[GreenShoes]

Oh my gosh . . this is so upsetting. There's a special place in my heart for Indians, I can't really explain it. There are many here in New Jersey where I live, and I've made many Indian friends online. Some of them are not just friends, some are people that I've come to be very fond of. I'm always fascinated to read about their culture, and their food, and their religious practices. And, quite frankly, I think they are beautiful. So, to read something like this, makes me want to cry. Please don't apologize for that, you did an amazing thing here by speaking the truth. I am deeply effected by this powerful piece of poetry.

[Kajal Sharma]

Even though India has moved forward but in some villages and small town this is prevalent

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Your words stabbed from the start..
The unfair but still prevailing side of our society, very well depicted..
Nice work.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you Jyoti