Close your eyes

about love and the distances

I know long distances are hard for me and you

And we know there is nothing we can do

Still we take our times out 

Because we just can't live without

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely

When we met, way you looked at me

and everything goes perfectly

and then I even love you more

one and two and three and four

you raise the power to infinity 

because our love is eternity

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely

But then its time we realize 

Its dark night, oh your dark eye

Hugging and kissing and love bites

But its time to say goodbye

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely

Then you say baby please don't go

But I can't stay no more

You hold my hand so tight 

Then i say it right 

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely...

Author's Note

Straight from my heart to my pen and then on to the paper

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind and sweet words for love.
"Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me"
True love is never fair. Sometime we need the memory of a love missed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Writergirl]

I like your author's note...so true. I enjoyed this piece, very nice.

[Gee]

Good job,seemed a bit forced in places,sorry,but overall enjoyed this poem.

[Ben Noah Suri]

Distances can be bridged in an instant in the mind's eye.... Nice write

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distant relationships are hard, sometimes, but if two people really love one another, distances a temporary and eventually they get to spend the rest of their lives together...good job...

in your recurring refrain I would use 'you' instead of 'u' simply because it's a formal piece of writing...

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much for the suggestion i ll keep that in mind

[Indra Neil]

Beautiful composition with wonderful rhyme flow! Keep writing and all the best!

[Kajal Sharma]

hey thanks

[Indra Neil]

You are welcome!

[Mayank]

really sweet piece, long distance relationship?

[Kajal Sharma]

yeah sort of