Close your eyes

about love and the distances

I know long distances are hard for me and you

And we know there is nothing we can do

Still we take our times out 

Because we just can't live without

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely

When we met, way you looked at me

and everything goes perfectly

and then I even love you more

one and two and three and four

you raise the power to infinity 

because our love is eternity

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely

But then its time we realize 

Its dark night, oh your dark eye

Hugging and kissing and love bites

But its time to say goodbye

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely

Then you say baby please don't go

But I can't stay no more

You hold my hand so tight 

Then i say it right 

Just close your eyes and what u see

I'm with you and you're with me

Hold me tight we're meant to be

Without you I feel so lonely...

Author's Note

Straight from my heart to my pen and then on to the paper

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Kind and sweet words for love.
"Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me"
True love is never fair. Sometime we need the memory of a love missed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Arjun Singh]

I really admire ur talent....
D way u exprsd ur feelings, it ws gd nd detaild, nd flowd nicely nd perfectly...
A gd write....
:)

[Kajal Sharma]

Thank you so much arjun

[Rajat malik]

And then to the Reader's heart.....
This is so Cute Kajal....
Love- something without which we can't live.....
This is an amazing one...i loved it

[Kajal Sharma]

Thank you so much Rajat

[Rajat malik]

My pleasure #Youarewelcome

[Saddam]

Just close your eyes and what u see
I'm with you and you're with me.

Touching and beautifully creation. You know it is the true love.
Love it/ like it.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you saddam...its always 'butterflies in stomach' to fall in love

[Saddam]

Yes.... colorful butterflies....
Most welcome dear...

[Kajal Sharma]

hahaha........

[Tomoe Tellez]

You must have a heart full of love. Such a sweet poem.

[Kajal Sharma]

thank you so much

[Tomoe Tellez]

I'm not into poems so much as you, but would you read mine, it's "Dear dark angel".

[Kajal Sharma]

i will sure and if you don't like poems read a story called "threads" and "freak out"

[Tomoe Tellez]

I sure will

[Swathi Praveen]

awwwww

[Kajal Sharma]

hahaha...but you tomboy how you like romantic stuff..:P

[Swathi Praveen]

haha...! tomboys do have feelings :D They do fall in love , They too feel the pain...they are just girls who don't fit in to the Society's 'girly checklists' :d

[Kajal Sharma]

i myself am not too girly ....great talking to you...:)

[Parul Sharma]

so damn romantic.....

[Shah Sabia]

Lovely :)
Its beautiful, the author's note perfectly fits in.

[hanck moody]

Your write-ups are mostly related to love stories??

[Kajal Sharma]

no not really check out the one titled "kill your girl child"

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Oh...this is awesome! submit it to the groups page. My favorite lines "Close your eyes and what u see, I'm with you, and you're with me."
I can relate to this, lovely write. 100 points, and a one way ticket to my favorites. :) keep it coming.